Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I believe that for any real relationship, at its roots is truthfulness. In his book, “How to make friends and influence people”, Dale Carnegie emphasised the importance of truthfulness as the foundation of any successful relationship. The famous author stressed that while being truthful all the time may make one vulnerable, most times it affords us opportunity to strengthen our bonds with others. Constant truthfulness is the force that breaks the façade of falsehood in a fake relationship and turns it into a real one.
The great Buddha while he was alive, journeyed far and wide in search of knowledge. In all his findings, he recognised the undeniability of developing a lasting relationship based on truthfulness with everyone one comes across. Many followers who have proved Buddha teachings not only had great relationships with people close to them but strangers and those they rarely interact with as well.
Aside Buddha, another legendary person whose extra-ordinary relationship with all and sundry was exemplary of a warm and deeply appreciated truth-based relationship is Gandhi. Gandhi when approach by the old and young would devote his time to ensure he expresses himself candidly to them all. His case demonstrated the kind of relationship we all desire and he has shown by the goodness of his relationships that constant truthfulness is the way to achieve that.
To leave out Mother Teresa as an epitome of excellence in relationships would be a disrespect. The beloved mother through her lifestyle cannot state enough how vital truthfulness is in all situations. Mother Teresa touched a significant amount of lives and formed lasting relationships entirely based on truthfulness. She showed that while being truthful always may seem difficult or frustrating to a relationship at first, toughing it out will surely make such relationship stronger.
In conclusion, the saying, to move fast go alone, to move far go with others, is predicated on the importance of founding any relationship on the pillars of constant truthfulness. The most impactful people across history like Dale Carnegie, Buddha and Gandhi achieved tremendous feats and are still known and followed today because of the basis of all their relationships - constant truthfulness.
- The best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones 33
- Altruism is a type of behaviour in which an animal sacrifices its own interest for that of another animal or group of animals Summarize the points made in the lecture being sure to specifically explain how they cast doubt on points made in the reading pas 3
- People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the pos 33
- Altruism is a type of behaviour in which an animal sacrifices its own interest for that of another animal or group of animals Altruism is the opposite of selfishness individuals performing altruistic acts gain nothing for themselves Summarize the points m 80
- Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances times and places 83
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, still, then, well, while, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1919.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36033519553 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20679963637 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583798882682 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.270695181 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.9375 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5625 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189613687785 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06621722204 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355758181735 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111607518624 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227864205152 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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