Some people say that tourism has many negative effects on the countries that people travel to. How true is this statement?. What can tourists do to reduce the harmful effects of tourism on local cultures and environments? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experienc
In today’s modern society, there is a dispute on the issue that travelers are the main element that causes adverse effects on the countries. Although other people oppose that contaminated environments and degeneration in local cultures can not be blamed as the primary responsibilities by people who make a tour to those countries. However, I personally suppose that tourism is not the major factor that results in the damage of a nation's culture and environment.
On the one hand, there are several reasons to assert that tourism is not the only element causing detrimental effects on local cultures and environments of countries. The most justified reason is that environmental damage has become an issue from a long time ago and still occurs nowadays, ever since the development of tourism has risen significantly in recent years. In addition, there are more than a problem other than the tourism effects that can cause pollution of the environment, such as industrial factories, climate change,... Another compelling reason is that not all tourists are non - ethical which means tourists in many situations are not the only person who do harm to the environment on purpose. According to a research of people who are likely to affect the environment and local culture in Vietnam, the proportion of the group of people who are tourists accounted for only 4%, which means, tourism from over the period is not the main factor causing the contaminated environment and disadvantage of the culture .
On the other hand, I also believe that tourism may not the only element leading to several adverse impacts on country's cultures or environments. For that belief, I suggest that each tourist, when traveling to other country, should be aware of the importance of keeping the environment and respect the country’s culture. When tourists can raise awareness of preserving local culture and protecting the environment will lessen the harmful impact of culture and environment for every country.
In conclusion, I claim that the statement illustrating the issue is not consistently accurate in many aspects. However, I would set a requirement for all people who tend to make accommodations to any country that you are heading for: Protect the environment and show respect to the country's traditional culture.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
... factor that results in the damage of a nations culture and environment. On the one...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
... as industrial factories, climate change,... Another compelling reason is that not...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...he environment on purpose. According to a research of people who are likely to affect the ...
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
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Suggestion: .
...ironment and disadvantage of the culture . On the other hand, I also believe t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ure and environment for every country. In conclusion, I claim that the statemen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, still, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 7.30460921844 315% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1943.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2371967655 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98836832054 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485175202156 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.320184568 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.461538462 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5384615385 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366201401973 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126560931632 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530932034992 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214409890695 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551182533092 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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