Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In today’s world, some people argue that public museums and art galleries are unnecessary as people can learn about historical relics and artworks by accessing the Internet. From my perspective, I totally disagree with this statement for some reasons.
There are a few compelling reasons why museums and art galleries are important. The first and most vital reason is that countries can use these locations as tourist attractions to improve the national economy. In particular, the vast revenue from selling tickets to foreign and domestic visitors would contribute a huge amount of money to the budget of the government. Moreover, museums and artwork galleries can effectively promote local culture and history to overseas tourists, this would enhance local tourism. Therefore, the authority can heavily invest in key fields such as health, education, and social services.
Another reason is that museums and art exhibitions can be used for educational purposes. Students would have opportunities to observe famous historical objects and ancient painting collections in real life thus they are able to obtain a lot of cultural and historical understanding. For instance, Vietnam National Museum contains many rare documentaries and valuable artifacts which do not exist on the Internet, students can come and find essential information for their research or assignments.
To summarize, museums and art galleries play a crucial role in the economy as well as education of various countries because they bring the government a large revenue and support students in providing reliable sources of knowledge. For those benefits, it is clear that these locations should not be disappeared in the future.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for instance, in particular, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5572519084 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9196652141 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637404580153 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5905353077 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.333333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302645169897 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100576479553 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841605024193 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179718328719 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0921783634008 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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