Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
In today's sophisticated and capricious world, it makes more sense to be the "Jack of all", instead of being a "Master of one". I agree with the prompt that universities should require each and every student to take diverse courses. Following are two reasons and a concession to support this thesis.
Firstly, as the society is progressing, there is a need for people who are skilled in variety of fields. People are running behind the versatile nature, instead of having depth in a specific field, which might get outcasted in near future. The mercurial nature of technology, culture as well as consumer trends are forcing the firms to recruit graduates who have insights in multiple subjects. For instance, as Computer Science is growing steeply, it's uses in different fields like economics, bio-informatics, Electronics etc. are growing as well. Thus, to solve a real life problem, an engineer, apart from computer science, should also have knowledge of economics, biology, electronics as well. The domains like algorithmic based stock trading are coming into existence, which involve computers science, as well as economics. Apart from this, it is also important to know foreign languages like French, Spanish, German etc. This enhances one's skillset, as well as helps in communicating with the foreign nationals. Therefore, nowadays, it is indispensable for students to undertake variety of courses outside their field of study.
Secondly, completing diverse courses can also provide students with a back-up option, if they want to change their major field of study. Sometimes, while enrolling in the colleges students take rash decisions of choosing a course without meticulously analysing their interests and inclinations. As a result, they are left dejected with line of study, and it becomes a tedious task for them just to clear the exam, leave alone making a profession in that field. Thus, minor courses can provide a way out, students can develop their careers in these fields. For example, a Sundar Pichai, CEO of Google, completed his bachelors in Metallurgical Engineering but later on, had a career managing one of the biggest Software giants. He has stated in his interviews that he loved coding/programming while in college, and this predisposition helped him in managing software products. Thus, undergoing variety of courses can help analyse and change their interests, and therefore, giving them multiple options to choose as a profession.
Thirdly, some may argue that undertaking different courses will impact the students in a negative way. As per them, it will hinder their concentration in the major field of study. And, it can be cumbersome for students to undergo such rigorous course structures. But, these reasons are not influential compared to the benefits provided by different courses.
Conclusively, it is essential for students to take variety of courses, as it strengthens their skillset, and provides them with a backup option if want to change their fields.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...pos;Jack of all', instead of being a 'Master of one'. I agree with...
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Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a negative way" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ferent courses will impact the students in a negative way. As per them, it will hinder their conc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, well, while, apart from, for example, for instance, of course, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2553.0 2235.4752809 114% => OK
No of words: 476.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36344537815 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97157980313 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 215.323595506 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560924369748 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 781.2 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.10617977528 290% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7381218899 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.12 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.04 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.32 5.21951772744 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209198106531 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574716754628 0.0831039109588 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649935829674 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117667932796 0.150359130593 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025231784761 0.0667264976115 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 152.0 100.480337079 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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