You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words
In this day and age, several individuals believe that nations hosting a worldwide sporting occasion could obtain positive results while others withstand this point of view. In my opinion, I would argue that the former standpoint eclipse the latter.
On the one hand, it stands no reason that countries with unstable economical backgrounds might be more vulnerable when operating global sports event. Put in another way, that type of fact needs an enormous investment from the government budget to reach the balance between demanding of national unions and the ability of the host nation. As a result, certain fields and a large number of residents could suffer from depression due to the shortage of money in short term stemming from the allocation of money by the government. For example, Greece had to undergo an economic crisis after holding EURO 2004 since their budget run out.
On the other hand, there are many tangible reasons to prove that sporting occasions might bring a profound influence on the improvement of citizens' life. In other words, to reach the benchmark of an international event, host nations have to complement a bunch of state-of-the-art facilities and erect top-notch infrastructure to keep pace with the fast-paced development of modern technologies and fulfill plenty of participants from foreign countries. It will lead to an increase in occupation opportunities, the number of potential customers, and positive changes in public services so people's living standards could be ameliorated to unexpected levels. For instance, most of countries that hold the Olympic Games witnessed a great alternative on several sides such as traffic systern, sports complex and so on. Thus, I think that holding a worldwide event might bring benefits.
In a nutshell, the unsustainable economic background is a reason why many people have a prejudice against holding international sports event but the positive effects on people's life make it become a better choice.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...e more vulnerable when operating global sports event. Put in another way, that type of...
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Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...nation. As a result, certain fields and a large number of residents could suffer from depression ...
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Line 5, column 671, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the countries') or simply say ''most countries''.
Suggestion: most of the countries; most countries
...ted to unexpected levels. For instance, most of countries that hold the Olympic Games witnessed a...
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Line 7, column 129, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...prejudice against holding international sports event but the positive effects on peopl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, i think, in short, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34076433121 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93206271495 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630573248408 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.8072432637 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.75 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8333333333 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180324812411 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600198403023 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361146762274 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110341345326 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276689559429 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.