the best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone.
Nowadays by the development of technology having impacts on human’s life and the fast pace of modern life especially in more crowded cities, it is hard to find a way to get relaxed. Some people believe that the best method of relaxing and relieve stress is to spend some time alone. however, I personally believe being alone for a while in order to get more relaxed is not a good choice for two reasons.
First, being alone in order to get more relaxed could cause some mental and emotional illnesses such as depression and serious sadness. For example, my uncle used to live in an industrial crowded city with much noise pollution, therefore in order to be more relaxed and to stay away from stress, he would rather has spent his time alone at weekends. After some months the signs of depression started to show off, he refused to talk with his family or his friends, he dissociated from his family, friends and all the people who cared about him. he also did not spend holiday with his family. Eventually he went to a psychologist office and could overcome his depression.
secondly, spending time alone could separate people from their family and their friends.in the other words, not spending time with family or friends would affect people ‘s communication with others. According to human’s behavioral characteristics, people need to communicate with each other, as the matter of fact When people spend their time alone, they would communicate less with other people. For example, if one spent his time with his friends or his family and communicating with them, he would be more relaxed because of having lots of fun with them and having fun would help him to reduce his stress.
In conclusion, spending time alone is not the perfect way to relax and chill because it could lead to some mental and emotional diseases like depression and it could separate people from their family and friends. I recommend people to spend their time with others instead of spend it alone and after some time they will see how more relaxed they are compered to when they spend their time alone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 284, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...eve stress is to spend some time alone. however, I personally believe being alone for a...
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Line 2, column 312, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
... stay away from stress, he would rather has spent his time alone at weekends. After...
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Line 2, column 544, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...and all the people who cared about him. he also did not spend holiday with his fam...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
...ice and could overcome his depression. secondly, spending time alone could separate peo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79778393352 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45673109205 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481994459834 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 546.3 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.6858700095 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.230769231 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7692307692 20.6045352989 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283227792634 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114361764059 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875408473309 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197132567225 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701839896181 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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