Should long term job seekers in receipt of government benefits be made to do voluntary work so that they give something back to the community Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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Should long-term job seekers in receipt of government benefits be made to do voluntary work so that they give something back to the community?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays it is believed that Should long-term job seekers in receipt of government benefits be made to do voluntary work so that they give something back to the community. In this essay I completely agree with this statement because it has more merit rather than demerit for some reasons

In the one hand the main benefit people who has benefit for their government to be volunteer is make they can give impact which is good for their environment, it is because rerely person who aware about their region when council don't have role about that, for example when every worker who pay from government cleaned their region as result make their location which they lives can be comfortable for living. it is important that regulation can bring positive affected to a lot of people without exception.

however there are some drawbacks of authorities which pressure their community for take an unpaid job. firstly, possibility it can make every single person difficult to focus on their formal job, it is due to they should manage their time with other job which they unexpert about that, take as on example people who get a job which they don't understand as result make their task not clear when finished. secondly it make decreasing of interest people for work in their community, it is because average people who has a job lazy to take unpaid job, as on example everyone who already married usually think about their family rather than other nevertheless it make people easier to refuse every job with underrated pay rate with their needs daily. it is drub that extremely people has desire to complete their live rather than their community before their needs accomplished.

To sum up from where I stand I believe volunteer work is good idea when government can manage and provide good regulation before decided to apply that regulation for make people understand and be cooperative with the role.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 230, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...o aware about their region when council dont have role about that, for example when ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 373, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'live'
Suggestion: live
...s result make their location which they lives can be comfortable for living. it is im...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 410, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ey lives can be comfortable for living. it is important that regulation can bring ...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...o a lot of people without exception. however there are some drawbacks of authorities...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: however,
...o a lot of people without exception. however there are some drawbacks of authorities...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Firstly
...their community for take an unpaid job. firstly, possibility it can make every single p...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 338, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...example people who get a job which they dont understand as result make their task no...
^^^^
Line 5, column 405, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
...ake their task not clear when finished. secondly it make decreasing of interest people f...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 417, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...sk not clear when finished. secondly it make decreasing of interest people for work ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 659, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...amily rather than other nevertheless it make people easier to refuse every job with ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 747, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...rrated pay rate with their needs daily. it is drub that extremely people has desir...
^^
Line 5, column 753, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'drubbed'.
Suggestion: drubbed
... pay rate with their needs daily. it is drub that extremely people has desire to com...
^^^^
Line 5, column 861, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "needs accomplished" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'accomplishing' or 'to be accomplished'.
Suggestion: accomplishing; to be accomplished
...than their community before their needs accomplished. To sum up from where I stand I beli...
^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for example, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 23.0 7.30460921844 315% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91304347826 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45647266168 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490683229814 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 138.465191926 49.4020404114 280% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 197.75 106.682146367 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.25 20.7667163134 194% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.875 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214933512527 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126215245354 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.160255414459 0.0667982634062 240% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172842185219 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126431026251 0.056905535591 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.8 13.0946893788 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.09 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 230, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...o aware about their region when council dont have role about that, for example when ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 373, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'live'
Suggestion: live
...s result make their location which they lives can be comfortable for living. it is im...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 410, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ey lives can be comfortable for living. it is important that regulation can bring ...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...o a lot of people without exception. however there are some drawbacks of authorities...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: however,
...o a lot of people without exception. however there are some drawbacks of authorities...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Firstly
...their community for take an unpaid job. firstly, possibility it can make every single p...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 338, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...example people who get a job which they dont understand as result make their task no...
^^^^
Line 5, column 405, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
...ake their task not clear when finished. secondly it make decreasing of interest people f...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 417, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...sk not clear when finished. secondly it make decreasing of interest people for work ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 659, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...amily rather than other nevertheless it make people easier to refuse every job with ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 747, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...rrated pay rate with their needs daily. it is drub that extremely people has desir...
^^
Line 5, column 753, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'drubbed'.
Suggestion: drubbed
... pay rate with their needs daily. it is drub that extremely people has desire to com...
^^^^
Line 5, column 861, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "needs accomplished" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'accomplishing' or 'to be accomplished'.
Suggestion: accomplishing; to be accomplished
...than their community before their needs accomplished. To sum up from where I stand I beli...
^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for example, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 23.0 7.30460921844 315% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91304347826 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45647266168 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490683229814 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 138.465191926 49.4020404114 280% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 197.75 106.682146367 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.25 20.7667163134 194% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.875 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214933512527 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126215245354 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.160255414459 0.0667982634062 240% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172842185219 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126431026251 0.056905535591 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.8 13.0946893788 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.09 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.