The graph below describes the changes in medical funding in four countries from 2010 to 2018 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The graph below describes the changes in medical funding in four countries from 2010 to 2018.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given bar chart compares how medical funding was changed in four different countries at eight-year intervals between 2010 and 2018.

It is clearly observed from graph that the largest amount of money was spend on medication in countries D and A in the year 2010. On the other hand, in 2018, country D accounted for the smallest figure for medical funding among other countries.

In 2010, country A saw a dramatic growth at 32 millions of dollars, while there was a sharp drop in counties B and C at nearly 24 and well over 12 millions of dollars, respectively. The figure for country C reached the least popularity at 20 millions of dollars in 2014, whereas it picked at just under 28M dollars in countries A and D. In addition. The number of country D decreased sharply from 32 to 16 millions of dollars over the entire period. It is also noting that the figure for country B remained same at approximately 24 millions of dollars.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...ph that the largest amount of money was spend on medication in countries D and A in t...
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Line 5, column 45, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '32 million'.
Suggestion: 32 million
...010, country A saw a dramatic growth at 32 millions of dollars, while there was a sharp drop i...
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Line 5, column 145, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '12 million'.
Suggestion: 12 million
...ties B and C at nearly 24 and well over 12 millions of dollars, respectively. The figure for c...
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Line 5, column 240, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '20 million'.
Suggestion: 20 million
...untry C reached the least popularity at 20 millions of dollars in 2014, whereas it picked at j...
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Line 5, column 404, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '16 million'.
Suggestion: 16 million
... country D decreased sharply from 32 to 16 millions of dollars over the entire period. It is a...
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Line 5, column 530, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '24 million'.
Suggestion: 24 million
...ountry B remained same at approximately 24 millions of dollars.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, whereas, while, in addition, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 777.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65269461078 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67647925101 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568862275449 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7753941726 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 5.23603664747 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186627602218 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877847518216 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710805891843 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162309927196 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662321184316 0.0819641961636 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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