Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter:
● Explain why you cannot go anymore
● Say who can go instead of you
● Say why this person is a good person to go with
Dear Peter,
Hope you are doing well. We had a great vacation with you guys. Thanks for making the holidays more memorable and of course for the photographs that you have sent me yesterday.
Ireland is indeed a spectacular country to travel at least once in a lifetime. I really surprised to see the landscapes, wildlife, and culture. Although the trip is finished, I can't get out of the memories. Moreover, I never forget the time we spent in your home along with your family.
I am sorry for not penning you right after my journey. I was suffering from covid 19 and was quarantined for two weeks. It took several days for me to become a normal person and I am perfectly alright now.
I would like to invite all of you to visit my home in London this month during your Christmas holidays. You know that London is a must-visit place in the time of Christmas. We feel delighted if you come and celebrate the festival with us for the whole week.
I would love to see you with your family soon. Take care and write back.
Warm Regards,
Samuel
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 178, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...lture. Although the trip is finished, I cant get out of the memories. Moreover, I ne...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, really, so, well, at least, of course, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53125 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43827889977 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651041666667 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.2509282008 44.8134815571 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 54.375 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0 16.8248392259 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8125 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265506178467 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805560882238 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066886043929 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150405191546 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660621218574 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.11 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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