Task 2: In many cities there is little control on the design and construction of new homes and office buildings, and people can build houses in their own style. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a situation?
It is obvious that national and local authorities tend to fail to introduce restriction on construction planning. While this tendency provides homeowners with many advantages of housing building, I would argue that the disadvantages outweigh such benefits.
On the one hand, it is incontrovertible that less controlled construction of housing stock can promote the investment of the cities. Particularly, if there are few policies are implemented in the building process, then it will be more convenient for the property developers to employ appropriate speculation on increasing estate construction with cost-effective designs. As a result, with more available housing, there will be fewer people leaving on the streets. From the economical perspective, without harsh controls of high-rise buildings, corporations can be provided with more accessible space for the construction of their offices, which potentially contributes to the increment of available employment for urban dwellers, ultimately leading to the enhancement of the whole economy.
On the other hand, it is also noteworthy that numerous detrimental consequences can result from this phenomenon. Firstly, with the increasing uncontrolled construction planning, urban sprawl will be encouraged, which is considered an undesirable feature of modern cities. For instance, in many developing cities, sprawling suburbs have sprung up alongside the presence of several slum areas and sink estates. Consequently, many areas of these cities have become an eyesore due to the incompatibility between the existing constructions. Secondly, the excessive increment in the towering skyscrapers has also overshadowed most of the prestigious buildings, especially museums or traditional houses, which reflect the typical aesthetic quality of the cities.
In conclusion, I believe that unplanned buildings have resulted in the undesirable growth of cities with ugliness and chaos. Thus, the benefits stemming from this problem are greatly outweighed by its disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.96563573883 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37001463177 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625429553265 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.6831146857 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.538461538 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6153846154 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165526036541 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549558816132 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446037218429 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965963087188 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355407041249 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.64 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.91 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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