you have just an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. you don't fully agree with this opinion
Dear Madam,
My name is Sinthya Mulyati Devi. I am such as citizen in Jakarta. I have reed your Article in foreign news, it is nice. Thank you have intoduce my city to other countries. But, I writting this letter to inform about my city, because i see there are some oppinion is wrong in your article.
Actually, many things in your article is greate, and discribe my city is really good. But i think your oppinion said that my city is have many similiar with other is wrong. It is due to might you just see from cover my city. If you, spend more many time in my town maybe you will have different oppinion. It is because my central city have many special things. For example, in my city so many different culture, many taste of food, available many pretty cheep food, stufss, souvener spesials, and many more. It is so really different with other countries. If you have oppurtunities in the future to visit my city, i can accompany you, to see many things in my centre city.
Thank you for giving the matter your attention. I hope in the future you will be like to visit my city again. And please tell me if you want to visit my town.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 234, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...letter to inform about my city, because i see there are some oppinion is wrong in...
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Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nd discribe my city is really good. But i think your oppinion said that my city i...
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Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...hink your oppinion said that my city is have many similiar with other is wrong. It i...
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Line 3, column 244, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
... from cover my city. If you, spend more many time in my town maybe you will have differen...
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Line 3, column 388, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...cial things. For example, in my city so many different culture, many taste of food, available ...
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Line 3, column 412, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun taste seems to be countable; consider using: 'many tastes'.
Suggestion: many tastes
..., in my city so many different culture, many taste of food, available many pretty cheep fo...
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Line 3, column 614, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...unities in the future to visit my city, i can accompany you, to see many things i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, may, really, so, for example, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33177570093 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21976389145 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523364485981 0.622605031667 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1224898586 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.9375 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.375 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193702621095 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853745853968 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551063954824 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149572740017 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00565915818436 0.0580467560999 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.24 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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