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How social media benefit people?

Social media has changed the way people live. How they communicate with people or how they make relationship is all based on social media. Research has shown there are more than 345,0000 people around the world that use social media in 30 minutes. So from my point of view, using social media not only has bad effects on people, but also it can have good effects for two specific reasons.
People can easily make relationship with their friends or other people. For example, your friend lives abroad, and you need to communicate with them. Additionaly, one of your family members is way far from home. You need to call them. On the other hand, sometimes making friendship through the social media is not appropriate. To exemplify, there are many people who want to spy on you and your social media such as Instagram, Facebook or Twitter and so on. There on your pages, you have your private information that you don’t want people to snoop on. Be careful of your social media.
Furthermore, there are many things that you want to do through the social media in your daily work. For instance, doctors want to make a session with other doctors, or they want to share some pictures from their work on their story. Moreover, there are some online classes for students that are related to social media. For example, in Afghanistan the situation that girls have like every thing is confiend. So they need to have some online classes so that they can continue their education; however, it is really hard, but it can be useful for all of them. In addition, people make business thorugh the social media like online shops.
As way of conclusion, social media has its own advantages and disadvantages. But the point is here that people should be careful about their usages and the way they want to use it daily mentioned by two specific reasons that are above.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 325.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71692307692 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34790401304 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467692307692 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1572606816 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.65 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346897075452 0.236089414692 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137345357057 0.076458572812 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124462846377 0.0737576698707 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241345015241 0.150856017488 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123482380718 0.0645574589148 191% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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