If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study, what would you choose? Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details.
If I had the choice to study a subject I never had the chance of studying before, it would definitely be psychology. I know this is a subject most of my friends would have liked having as their subject during high school, but as it was not taught in our school until very recently, many of us, including me, decided to major in psychology once we graduated high school. However, due to unforeseen circumstances, I had to give up my dream and instead pursue a career in something entirely different.
Although I may not have the chance of studying psychology at the moment, I have not given up hope of doing so someday. In the meantime, I sometimes spend my free time reading articles on this subject.
The reason why I find psychology so intriguing is because I wish to understand how the human brain works and how it affects our behavior. The human brain being so complex and boundless has always fascinated me. I wish to understand how every part of the brain works and interacts with the rest of the body, how it responds to changes in environment and how these events differ from person to person.
I have seen people who react differently to similar situations, for example, when something unexpected happens, such as a fire, some people can remain calm while others panic. I wish to understand why people’s reactions differ, what triggers these actions. Does the said event remind them of a past event that was similar to this one? Or how do people remain calm? What are they thinking in such moments? There are so many questions that I have to ask that listing them here would be impossible.
These are the reasons almost anyone wanting to study psychology would give, however, my biggest driver of wanting to study psychology was to help people, especially those who have had childhood trauma. I have experienced such damage myself and this affected my behavior. I used to get angry over small things, I would always be overanxious, stressed and afraid. I paid no heed to my state until it started affecting my physical health. I needed to understand why I was behaving as such and why I was so different from everyone else. After much research and self-talk, I found the root of my problem. Today, I can safely say that I am at a much better place now. I could not remove the trauma but I successfully reduced its impact on me. Now I wish to have formal training and education so that I help others overcome their problems and put an end to these cycles of abuse.
In short, I wish to study psychology so that I can understand the human brain and how it interacts with our body, as well as how our external environment affects our brain and ultimately our behavior. But most importantly, I want to be able to use this knowledge to help and guide others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, well, while, as to, for example, in short, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 78.0 43.0788530466 181% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2286.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 496.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60887096774 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63427144695 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506048387097 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 717.3 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6392386477 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.44 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.84 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.56 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152074621747 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430946556408 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645825043972 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0831805138338 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587215910422 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.