Vaccinating children against preventable diseases is not only unnecessary but also dangerous. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Immunization of children against childhood diseases has become a hot topic of debate among certain demographics of society. It is generally believed that it is not only hazardous to get the children vaccinated but also needless. This essay will argue why vaccinating against spreadable ailments is absolutely imperative despite some potential risks.
The prominent reason that why parents worry about inoculation is that sometimes it causes side-effects such as fever, swelling on the area and body ache also which at times become that much deleterious that loss of life is also reported, Corona Vaccination for example, during COVID-19 injection programme, many of the individuals complained about unexpected fatigue, muscle pain, chills and diarrhoea symptoms. Even loss of immunity was also reported amongst the youngsters. Thereby, such instances at that time also forced genitors to avoid injecting their offsprings.
Although there are potential drawbacks, I still believe that it is fruitful in many ways. Firstly, such treatments save a person from fatal illnesses and other communicable diseases. Indeed, childhood is the time period when the innocent lives are vulnerable to every illness, while the immunity at that time is not strong enough to fight against them. So, taking precautions is mandatory to protect children from these issues such as polio, measles and rubella, whooping cough etcetera, as these are life threatening or sometimes disturb functioning of certain body parts. To illustrate, Maharaja Ranjit Singh, a great warrior from Punjab, India lost his eye sigh to polio. Therefore, instead of going through life-time suffering, pain of two to three days should be tolerated.
To conclude, i would like to reiterate by saying that it is better to take precautions rather than getting trapped into problems. So, government must come forward and launch campaigns to aware people about the benefits of such treatments and ignore the minor risks involved, as this will not only be beneficial for society but also for overall development of nations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47826086957 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7989344724 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66149068323 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.836844345 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135551245827 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468245948135 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569022343473 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901562375528 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770291878843 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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