The population of many cities is growing rapidly.
+) What are the effects on people living in these cities?
+) What can be done to maintain the quality of life of people?
In the developed world, many cities’ population is creasing quickly in the urban area. Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend, solutions can be taken to mitigate these potential problems.
There are a number of problems related to this trend. Firstly, housing problems are put into emergency because of the lack of accommodation for people to meet their demands. Besides that, overpopulation causes a significant reduction in infrastructure. For example, hospitals can deal with various patients at the same time as well as more families in urban areas means more children resulting in fewer educational opportunities for them. Another problem is the increasing population also has an adverse impact on the natural environment. The more population is, the more vehicles that release emissions cause serious pollution in urban areas.
However, there are several actions that could be taken by the government and local authorities to solve the issues mentioned above. Firstly, more money should be spent on developing infrastructure and creating more job opportunities, especially in rural areas. This can reduce the number of people who move from the countryside to big cities. It not only mitigates the overpopulation problem but also contributes to advancing the economic level of rural areas. Furthermore, an official law, which stipulates heavy penalties for those who destroy the environment, has to be applied.
In conclusion, various measures can be implemented to tackle the problems that are certain to arise with the serious growth in population in the urban areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 359, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'areas'' or 'area's'?
Suggestion: areas'; area's
... time as well as more families in urban areas means more children resulting in fewer ...
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Line 3, column 645, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cause serious pollution in urban areas. However, there are several actions that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52610441767 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06687451041 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622489959839 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8208650659 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2857142857 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7857142857 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143326171159 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047384614804 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454285834124 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988951900728 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502586403259 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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