The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
Summarises the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The table intricate the information on coffee and bananas Fairtrade-lable Fairtrade-label sales in 1999 and 2004 in the UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden.
Overall, UK and Switzerland were respectively the highest countries in sales of coffee and bananas. In contrast, Sweden was in the final position in both products during the period given. In general, there was an upward trend in these five countries.
In 2004, the England sold 20 millions of euros in coffee, which boosted this country into the first position in this category of product. Meanwhile, Switzerland's sale of bananas was up to 47 million of euros (more than 32 millions in comparison with 1999). It can be seen from the tables that Denmark was in the final stage with bananas. That leads to the fact that residents in this nation didn't consume many bananas.
Belgium, which was reported having an increasing trend in both of these products. With coffee, it stands in the third position with 2 million of euros in 2004 and in the same position with 4 millions in bananas. Indeed, Sweden's sales of coffee and bananas were the smallest amount compared to the UK, it was less than nearly 20 millions in coffee and 59 millions in bananas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, third, while, in contrast, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89805825243 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69795064714 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52427184466 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6248137418 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7272727273 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178020632609 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718734388026 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904111263116 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143600961389 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110881756092 0.0819641961636 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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