In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way.
Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
In recent years, the younger generation tends to purchase things following trends. Understanding this tendency, businesses are more likely to define their products as new in their advertisements. In this essay, I will argue why following hot trends and customers' belief in the quality of the products play a vital role in advertising, as well as explaining my opinion about this positive development.
To start with, trending topics on a great number of social platforms are the key factors, which affect the way businesses advertise. Firms are taking advantage of these trends to persuade their customers in purchasing their products. Indeed, young people nowadays agree to spend a huge amount of money on unnecessary things in order to keep up-to-date with the latest trends. Therefore, marketing usually emphasises that their products are modern in various ways. Moreover, by marking that their products are updated, businesses will make the shoppers believe in the quality of products. An obvious example is the iPhone which is the most widely popular brand in the world. It can be seen from advertisements of Apple that these are more likely to trick customers by showing their appealing features and displays. Accordingly, people would appreciate spending their money having these cutting-edge products.
This adjustment leads to a positive development that can boost the society's economy. By successfully convincing buyers to buy products, profits of their companies will be beneficial. Without a doubt, part of the profits from sales will be sent to taxes payment. Subsequently, this will upgrade the economy of that country in general. Even more, by following this way of advertising, domestic brands can enhance the consumption from consumers. By increasing the purchase of local brands, import is no longer necessary. That would contribute to the general economy of a nation.
To conclude, there is a recorded trend that sales in businesses advert their products as new in several ways. This essay gave reasons why keeping up with trends and desiring to have high quality products are the crucial factors to this development in advertising. For the aforementioned reasons, this upward trend has contributed to the economy of the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 248, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'tax'.
Suggestion: tax
... the profits from sales will be sent to taxes payment. Subsequently, this will upgrad...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, moreover, so, therefore, well, in general, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1907.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37183098592 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91092927162 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552112676056 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9667598686 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8095238095 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9047619048 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09523809524 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328870620803 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893939721952 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820854523733 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196738366808 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521025292552 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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