Many people think that salary is the most important consideration when we choose a job To what extent do you agree or disagree

Essay topics:

Many people think that salary is the most important consideration when we choose a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Topic 3- Many people think that salary is the most important consideration when we choose a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, going to work is an important job for everyone in society. However, many people think that people go to work only for salary. I completely disagree with this thought.

First, I agree that money is very significant. However, when people choose their job, they will consider whether the job is suitable for them, not because of the salary. Even with high wages, they quickly quit. For instance,
If that person feels too tired with their current job, regardless of the high salary, they are ready to give up their job to change to another job.

Second, There are a lot of people who choose to work according to their interests. For example, if a person has a different look and likes aesthetics, becoming a designer is extremely easy for them. Simply put, they choose according to what makes them happy.

Moreover, people in our society want to try new jobs regularly. So, in my opinion, salary is not essential. Although money is a necessity in our life, a job is not the only way to earn money.

In conclusion, a salary is a necessity to live. However, it is not the top requirement for applying for a job. For some people, salary is important, however, not everyone is.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
This essay topic by users
Post date Users Rates Link to Content
2023-04-27 Bao Ngoc Tho 56 view
2023-04-27 Bao Ngoc Tho 73 view
2023-04-27 Bao Ngoc Tho 61 view
2023-04-27 Bao Ngoc Tho 56 view
2023-04-23 Bao Ngoc Tho 73 view
>>> More users practiced this topic >>>
Essay Categories
IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... wages, they quickly quit. For instance, If that person feels too tired with thei...
^^^
Line 8, column 224, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to accord'.
Suggestion: to accord
... easy for them. Simply put, they choose according to what makes them happy. Moreover, ...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1104.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71794871795 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54983208378 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.594970452 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.3333333333 106.682146367 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.0 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390402151524 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124737458369 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1599278637 0.0667982634062 239% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228948201319 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.29513197433 0.056905535591 519% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 13.0946893788 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.