Some people think that famous people can help international aid organizations to draw attention to important problems. Others believe that celebrities can make the problem seem less important.
The International aid organizations always tend to serve numerous people with the support of many groups who are willing to help those in need. One school of thought opines that celebritie's can possibly promote public awareness like poverty, illiteracy etc, while others think that the focus on the issue might be shifted on them. I believe that the foremost view is more rational and will discuss more in detail in the forthcoming paragraphs.
Firstly, when star kinds of people support or take part in the event, then the followers who worship them as their superstar will also start participating in the charitie events. The celebrities set an example for their fan base in these kinds of activities. To put it down clearly, they have been an inspiration for many people around the world. Suriya, for example, a well known tamil actor is supporting a large number of students for their education. As a result, so many unknowns have started to donate to the organization to help students who cannot afford their tuition fee.
Secondly, famous people can influence individuals all over the world and their views will reach everyone rapidly. Furthermore, as they are media people they have more power to draw attention to even non sensational issues, which in turn brings much value to the affected humans in need. James Eric, for example, a popular singer took to instagram to make his fans aware of the worsening covid situation in India and asked them to offer help. This action of his is extending covid-related help across the country.
To conclude, celebs tend to be a part of social activities. This essay discussed why renowned people's involvement is an added advantage rather than making the issue worsen. In my opinion, engaging celebrities in aid groups can create global awareness, so they should continue spreading information and inspire many of them.
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- Some people think that famous people can help international aid organizations to draw attention to important problems Others believe that celebrities can make the problem seem less important 78
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Suggestion: can
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Suggestion:
...vid-related help across the country. To conclude, celebs tend to be a part of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for example, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06774193548 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67543844326 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632258064516 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4953676867 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.733333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206190366547 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606180912318 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438739060931 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125380521292 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428227526402 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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