Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The question of whether pursuing higher education at a university or college is the optimal path to a successful career, compared to entering the workforce immediately after finishing school, has been the subject of much debate. This essay will explore both perspectives and the author will hereby provide his opinion on the matter.
On the one hand, some argue that getting a job straight after school is a more advantageous path to a successful career. Firstly, practical experience gained through employment provides individuals with real-world skills that are highly valued by employers. By entering the workforce earlier, individuals can begin earning income, achieving financial independence, and developing a strong work ethic. Moreover, certain fields prioritize hands-on experience over formal degrees. Vocational or trade careers often offer attractive prospects for individuals who prefer practical learning and quick entry into the job market.
Notwithstanding the fact that starting to work straight after school is attractive for several reasons, I believe that it would be better for students to continue to go to further education. The first and the most obvious reason must be mentioned is that higher education equips individuals with a comprehensive knowledge base and specialized skills, enhancing their overall competence. Universities offer diverse courses that allow students to explore various subjects and discover their passions, thereby fostering personal and intellectual growth. Additionally, critical thinking abilities developed through higher education enable individuals to analyze complex issues and find innovative solutions. The author believes that such skills are highly valued by employers in today's competitive job market. An analysis conducted from HNUE clearly pointed out that 74.3% of the surveyed companies do require bachelor or master degree in order to achieve a better position in their corporation.
In conclusion, the author is far more on the same side with advancing to further education because of the comprehensive knowledge and skills that students acquired during their academic path.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
The question of whether pursuing higher education at a universi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, moreover, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1832.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.81587301587 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95155134273 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634920634921 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4370065304 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.857142857 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180022286204 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056987951508 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766341402776 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954289133123 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592062259636 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.77 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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