Some people think the main benefit of international cooperation is in the protection of the environment, while others think that the main benefits are in the world business. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is widely believed that the benefit that international could bring about is environmental protection, whereas others argue that it is the world business. Individually, I am of the opinion that the ever-expanding cross-border collaboration benefits both environmental conservation and global business.
On the one hand, the cooperation between countries can be hugely beneficial to the economy of the world. As a matter of fact, the economy of a developing country, especially the one with poor economy, can be thrive positively. To be more specific, international cooperation allow underdeveloped countries to export products as well as import them easier in order to ensure a stable income and generate more profits. To illustrate, according to a survey of Oxford University, Nigeria has witnessed a significant increase in the standard of living of its citizens in the past few years. As a result, this has contributed enormously to a greater overall increase in global GDP.
On the other hand, I believe that the preservation of environment can be vastly enhanced by international cooperation. First of all, international cooperation can gather up additional governments to address some global issues that don’t appear conceivable to be resolved by just one or a few nations. By holding a summit meeting, for instance, each government will be better aware of its obligations to reduce greenhouse gas emissions, which is a valuable method to slow down the rate of global warming. Additionally, by working together more, scientists and researchers throughout the world might exchange more sophisticated technology to address environmental problems. This method is beneficial, especially for emerging nations with more severe ecological issues and technology is more advanced.
In conclusion, the two fundamental effects of globalization, environmental preservation and business, cannot easily be compared since they are two separate fields with very different priorities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, as a result, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65100671141 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43877711616 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597315436242 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.103903254 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.538461538 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8461538462 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111387822455 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421978670779 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488842596146 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0697709735736 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637592192135 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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