1. You currently live in a rental apartment, and the noise from your neighbors disturbs you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter
o describe how this situation affects you;
o explain what steps you have taken to address the problem;
o ask the landlord to take action to resolve the issue.
Dear Mr. Jasohn,
I am writing this letter to inform you about an annoying issue which has recently occurred in the apartment. Lately, Mr. Tom, the neighbor who lives in the flat on the third floor, has taken care of a dog. Unfortunately, his dog has quite naughty and piercing. As a matter of fact, he makes miserable noises every second even at the midnight. Because of this inconvenience, I have suffered from insomnia for two weeks.
Although I talked with Mr. Tom about this matter and asked him to find a solution, until today, no measures have been taken by him. Last night, I desperately request him to take his dog to a veterinarian but he became angry and ignored my request.
Anyway, I want you to talk with Mr. Tom and convince him to visit either a veterinarian or dog trainer to resolve this problem.
I would appreciate it if you can consider this issue soon.
Best regards
Elham Mousavi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, if, second, so, third, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 750.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62962962963 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61311687839 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.691358024691 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0470263019 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180538374812 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642807068046 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570411908693 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11851498087 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470024290333 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.