Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people think that a university education is the best direction to a prospering career whilst others presume that working straightly after high school is a better option. From my perspectives, studying at university is my preference as this is a crucial contribution to a person's skills.
On the one hand, attending university contributes importantly to the expertise of a person and it increases the rate of job acceptance. First, a university education provides students with specialized command of a field. Thus, undergraduates can strengthen the foundation of their major field to deal with bad situations at work. For example, 70% of the US officers who attended university found malfunction less stressful as they learnt how to solve the problems during university years. Moreover, a university certificate precipitates the chances of job acceptance as companies prioritize workers with compulsory knowledge and skills. For instance, 60% of Vietnamese corporations prefer workers who have university certificate to uneducated ones.
On the other hand, a job straight after high school helps people earn a living earlier than university attendees as they do not need to focus on studying. For example, manicurist is a profitable job for many people as they do not need a university certificate but can still earn a huge amount of money. Furthermore, working without university could develop new skills for people as they need to work different jobs to make money. According to the UK workers who skipped university, working early creates helpful experience for them to work for multiply fields.
In conclusion, although working without university education fastens the time of moneymaking and develops new skills for workers, I assume that it is better to have a proper university education since it helps obtain command and betters the chances of job acceptance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, then, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38095238095 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10900727475 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551020408163 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6019140054 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.692307692 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193858496128 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077485902352 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716190694189 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138403286602 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724477171473 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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