In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing.
Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
In contemporary settings, moving to cities to settle down is a popular tendency around the world. Thus, the number of people living in the countryside is substantially falling. From my perspective, I am of the opinion that this trend exerts adverse impacts on the society
To commence, increasing city-oriented movers will certainly lead to overpopulation in the cities. The primary consequence of this phenomenon is the burden it puts on public services. As the demand is rising, more pressure is placed on public services, such as transport or healthcare systems, which requires the government to invest a huge amount of money to handle. More than that, the more people there are, the more competitive the environments become. To illustrate, it is much more challenging for graduates to apply for a well paid job or for students to obtain their academic goals in major cities.
Beside that, it is irrefutable that this development will widen the gap between the rich and the poor. Since the majority of citizens settle down in the urban, almost every enterprise will not build their institutions in undeveloped countryside. Therefore, there will be fewer career prospects for rural dwellers, and they have to make a living via low paid jobs. Henceforth, countryside inhabitants remain poor, whereas those living in the Metropolitan become wealthier. Eventually, this huge gap will prevent the holistic development of a whole country.
In summary, the aforementioned analysis indicates that the case of rural citizens moving to urban areas is a negative development. Hence, the authorities should have their own policies as soon as possible to ensure the stable development of the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3037037037 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04465170061 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3617601603 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.285714286 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160981095952 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054427475603 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047334596677 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100601096208 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523082319461 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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