Some people think that travelling to work and working in the company's buildings makes employees more productive. However, other argue that it is better for employees to work at home.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion
Many people think that requiring employees to go to work and work in the company's buildings makes them feel more productive. However, some people have another opinion that employees feel better working at home. From my point of view, both views have its benefit. This essay will detail the grounds for my perspective.
On the other hand, it is common that in many countries, workers ought to travel to their offices. Firstly, the employments possess some conditions that can boost their employee's productivity. To illustrate, the workplace can create a sense of concentrated atmosphere on their job task. In addition, they also can work together and receive assistance from colleagues. Moreover, many wage-earners reckon that home is particular for their members of family and relaxing. Therefore, they do not want to bring pressure from their job to their house.
On the other hand, some people believe that working in their private house takes them more advantageous circumstances in labor. It is obvious that freelance works give freelancer much time to complete their mission. To demonstrate, each onus that employers charge them always has its deadline. Thereby, their employees can finish their duty whenever they want as long as before their deadline. Furthermore, working in their own house makes them comfortable space for their mind. For instance, when you work in fieldwork, you will bear the pressure from your superior. Because of this reason, many people must to take a break from work.
In my opinion, each type of job will be suitable for different people. Because people who have introverted personality is more fascinated by freelance work. By contrast, outgoing people will be more appropriate for the first kind of job.
In conclusion, both kinds of work have their drawback and beneficial aspects. However, I believe that depending on personality of each person will have a suitable job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 604, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...or. Because of this reason, many people must to take a break from work. In my opinion,...
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Line 4, column 71, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... will be suitable for different people. Because people who have introverted personality...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21103896104 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74243427907 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.7422430961 49.4020404114 36% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.9545454545 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335635864246 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104315071498 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107503722833 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19580161184 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123672786374 0.056905535591 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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