In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think it is happening? How to solve this issue?
It is widely acknowledged that human activities are having a devastating impact on the natural environment, leading to the extinction of thousands of plant and animal species. This essay will outline ways in which humans are contributing to this situation before suggesting several viable solutions.
One of the primary causes of environmental destruction is the overconsumption of fossil fuels, both in production and daily life. The burning of these fuels increases the amount of CO2 in the atmosphere, exacerbates climate change, and drives some species to the brink of extinction as they are unable to adapt and tolerate the changing conditions. In addition, the overexploitation of natural resources such as mines and forests leads to habitat loss and further biodiversity decline.
To address these issues, national governments should take steps to protect endangered species by establishing national parks and wildlife sanctuaries. For example, many African countries have created parks to shelter endangered species such as elephants, lions, and rhinos. Additionally, raising public awareness about the importance of forest conservation can encourage individuals to reduce carbon emissions by using public transportation or renewable energy sources like solar and wind power. Finally, adopting eco-friendly lifestyle habits, such as reducing meat consumption, can also help to mitigate the impact of human activity on the environment.
In conclusion, the abuse of non-renewable resources and overexploitation of forests are major causes of biodiversity decline. It is essential that government policies and public awareness campaigns work together to ensure the survival of many species for generations to come.
- In some countries more and more adults continue to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 73
- While people in developing countries are happier than in the past people in developed countries are less happy Why What can be learnt from this 78
- In many countries the number of animals and plants is declining Why do you think it is happening How to solve this issue 84
- Some people think children have the freedom to make mistakes while other people believe that adults should prevent children from making mistakes Discuss both sides and give your opinion 56
- More people put their personal information online address telephone number for everyday activities such as socializing on social networks or banking purposes Do you think it is a positive or negative development 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 283, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... some species to the brink of extinction as they are unable to adapt and tolerate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86904761905 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27946601283 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638888888889 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3400592519 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.454545455 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0623755947151 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0225447129399 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312937284339 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0385016768445 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366303670514 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.77 50.2224549098 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.06 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.74 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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