Environmental problems are too big for individual countries and individual people to address. We have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is to address it at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Environmental issues are too complicated to solve individually by either people or country, since they cover a wide range of implications. Thus, some people believe that worldwide comprehensive actions are needed to address those problems. Personally, I agree that international collaborations are crucial to prevent the undesirable effects of ecological issues.
To begin with, it is commonly thought that one environmental damage can have a wider implication in its surroundings. This is due to human’s tendency to harm nature impulsively without prior careful preparation. For instance, the human’s shifting cultivation in a small region of Riau generates huge cases of forest fires causing air pollution that spreads through other countries such as Malaysia and Singapore. Even though it is an individual matter, the effects of this situation are wider than it is expected . As a result, the collaboration intra countries has become an urgency to solve ecological problems.
To continue with this notion, the collaboration among countries gain many beneficial impacts not only for solving the issue but also to prevent the forthcoming environmental cases. This issue can be addressed through the international conferences which include the environmental experts, government, and other stakeholders. The more environmental activists involved, the brighter decisions they would make. For example, the 6th annual forum of the ASEAN organization is attended by various experts and youth which resulted in new agreements and regulations for the future relating to the climate change issue that should be done by involved countries. This is a measurable effort to reduce the forthcoming environmental cases.
To conclude, the environmental problems are always seen as something serious that can be causing the sustainable damages. I believe that involving experts diversities in terms of global collaboration are obviously crucial for both solving and avoiding environmental damages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80272108844 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29622628587 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612244897959 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6199761313 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.733333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196930323241 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605308236989 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320202825287 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112928963097 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344064961792 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.36 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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