The government should sometimes infringe on people's freedom for the security of society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Many people believe that the idea of infringing individual liberties is abhorrent. Nevertheless, I firmly believe that one's freedom can be violated by the government as a feasible approach to prevent potential dangers and to ensure the observation of safety regulations in society.
To begin with, it is an indisputable fact that intruding upon individual liberties is acceptable because it means to shield people from danger. It is vitally important that the government attempts to promote public safety since there has been a climb in the crime rate, which goes with a plethora of risks. For example, according to recent research at airports around the world, they conduct security checks on people and their belongings. Although this seems intrusive at times, It is a feasible approach to prevent potential attacks from people.
Furthermore, interceding people's freedom right is to ensure the safety regulations are followed strictly. Some certain jobs may threaten the lives of a multitude of people if they are not responsible enough. Take an instance of pilots and bus drivers, they must undergo a series of medical tests to ensure that they can be in charge of protecting their passengers while working. They have to fly or drive a large number of passengers daily, so they may put their passengers’ lives in jeopardy since
In conclusion, the government’s purpose of intruding on citizens’ private lives is to protect people from dangerous situations and to make sure safety regulations are abided. Therefore, governments should be allowed to infringe on the freedom of their people since they have the appropriate measures to guarantee society’s safety.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 406, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...hile working. They have to fly or drive a large number of passengers daily, so they may put their...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...heir passengers’ lives in jeopardy since In conclusion, the government’s purpose ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33962264151 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9595011751 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588679245283 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6778570595 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.636363636 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173185040038 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704526978935 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515536510246 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112564809933 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530659169747 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.