Write an essay at least 180 words about the advantages of travelling. Give reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.
In this day and age, going along with the development of transportation, travelling has been becoming a more and more popular activity. There are some advantages of travelling we will mention in this essay which are to enhance the knowledge and to achieve piece of mind.
First of all, travellers can enhance their knowledge effectively. They have chances to discover the place where they go to, of course, but it can also allow them to learn about a different civilization, stories throughout the history and even its contribution to the world. In addition, it provides a hand-on educational experience that they cannot be replicated in books or classrooms. As a result, travellers are able to take more experience and widen the knowledge on their own.
Secondly, people can achieve piece of mind throughout travelling. Nowadays, daily routines involve many people navigating in chase of their busy schedules. Therefore, they easily get stuck in stress and burnout which make them feel dissatisfied with their jobs. Thus, many people consider travelling as a cure. By travelling, thay can take a step back and think about things and people they miss. Subsequently, travellers get a better perspective on their own life. Moreover, travelling may let them live life for its own sake.
In short, according to the aforementioned advantages of travelling, people can surely take travelling without thinking. Therefore, I strongly agree that travelling is a beneficial activity for all of us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in addition, in short, of course, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26359832636 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02715544758 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606694560669 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.875870837 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8666666667 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9333333333 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0968307966033 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361637662962 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292548856315 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0674748730943 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199975234208 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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