The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Yes, I agree with the given statement that the most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives
The present era is the era of science and technology. We can see different kinds of inventions day by day. Every inventions have their own purpose. These inventions are called technologies. Scientists invent new technologies to make any kind of work faster and easier. These Kinds of technologies are used in almost every field like farming, medical sector, factories and construction. These inovations are meant to help people in then respective fields to make their work easier.
Science has also discovered many other things rather than technologies only. It has discovered the proper use of chemical and biological plants that can be used while making medicine to cure different kinds of diseases. In farming sector many new methods of cultivating crops are discovered which are more reliable and, gives good result, all of this has been possible due to science. Different other things are invented to make people's work more easier, faster and reliable people can now set depend on technologies to do any task. Technologies donot disappoint im doing any task. Robot have been invented in past few years. They are programmed to do every kind of task that a person can do. Not only performing tasks like humans they can also do such tasks that a human cannot perform. Science is meant to help people in different fields.
In conclusion improving peoples lives is the most important aim of science. We can say so because science has proved it by making new inventions and discoveries that helps people in their work. Which had hepled people indoing those hard work in a more comfortable way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ience should be to improve peoples lives The present era is the era of science an...
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Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
...fferent kinds of inventions day by day. Every inventions have their own purpose. Thes...
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Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ientists invent new technologies to make any kind of work faster and easier. Thes...
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Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...construction. These inovations are meant to help people in then respective fields...
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Line 5, column 443, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...hings are invented to make peoples work more easier, faster and reliable people can now set...
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Line 5, column 589, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...not disappoint im doing any task. Robot have been invented in past few years. They a...
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Line 7, column 195, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...veries that helps people in their work. Which had hepled people indoing those hard wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, while, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9965034965 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64866313482 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541958041958 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1869597199 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2105263158 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0526315789 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57894736842 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225600503774 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753586329967 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120501593229 0.0667982634062 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223691260367 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.190782863553 0.056905535591 335% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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