The maps below show how the town of Harbone changes from 1936 to 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams illustrate the transformations took place in the town of Harborne between 1936 and 2007.
Overall, the town underwent dramatic changes, of which the development of a residential complex and more malls are the most important changes.
The town saw significant changes in the northwest, with the chopping down of trees and the replacement of a bicycle track with a road. In the middle centre of the town, the post office, bank and library remained unchanged, while the candy and butcher shops were demolished to make way for a supermarket. In the innermost of the downtown, a brand-new shopping complex was constructed to replace the open space. There used to be a flower shop to the northeast of the cycle track, but it then was redeveloped into a travel agent located to the southwest of the shopping center.
In the northeast of the town, the river was turned into a lake where a plethora of housing areas was constructed alongside the lake. Meanwhile, the south-east of the town also witnessed significant changes, with the government offices being transformed into a museum, and a gold course replacing the farmland.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02116402116 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91494538226 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582010582011 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.233328039 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.625 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0971731137848 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432530961944 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367253485829 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0645052875507 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341319932114 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.