The government should sometimes infringe on people's freedom for the security of society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?
It is a common belief that the act of infringing on people's freedom by the government is privacy penetration. However, I firmly believe that it is crucial for the security of the society because government can protect people from danger and make sure that safety regulations are followed.
To begin with, people's freedom infringement is important for protecting them from danger. Many rules or measures are provided to prevent potential attacks. For instance, at the airports, security checks are conducted in order to protect people from harm.
On top of that, the governments infringe on people freedom to make sure that safety regulations are followed. There are certain jobs that can endanger people's lives. For example, school bus drivers and pilots must undergo random medical tests to ensure there abilities to operate the vehicles well, so that they will not cause bad effect on others people.
To sum up, government infringe on people's freedom to protect them and to make sure that safety regulations are followed. For these reasons, the idea of government infringe on people's freedom is very crucial for the security of society.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, well, for example, for instance, to begin with, to sum up, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 185.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19459459459 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62044554283 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 176.041082164 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551351351351 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6821828323 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295697385795 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136245025863 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844608104546 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20690221449 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596618523894 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, well, for example, for instance, to begin with, to sum up, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 185.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19459459459 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62044554283 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 176.041082164 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551351351351 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6821828323 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295697385795 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136245025863 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844608104546 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20690221449 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596618523894 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.