Many people now use written language in a less formal and more relaxed way than in the past. Why is this the case? Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that in this modern era, written language is performed more informally than before. The root of this tendency might be the preference of efficiency over formality among people. While formal writing might show proficiency, it prevents writers from expressing their emotions and mitigate the effectiveness of the writings, which is negative overall.
To begin with, formal texts are often long and take a lot of time to read. These days people prefer saving time and energy for more important tasks, therefore, they tend to utilize communicating methods that are simple and effective at the same time.
Writing in formal language might be beneficial, especially in workplace. Companies often apply formal writing into their paper works and communication. It shows respect and a neutral reaction to any problems that are discussed between different levels of employees. Email, for instance, is usually written in formal language when being utilized as a communicating method between business partners or between employers and employees.
However, writers might find it hard to show feelings in formal writings and sometimes it could create difficulties for the readers. As formal writings are usually written in a neutral tone, it would create barriers for people when they want to express their love or anger to others. Love letters would sound emotionless and boring if written in a formal way, which then lead to failures in demonstrating the writers’ love, for example. Informal language therefore would be more suitable and useful in daily situations, such as exchanging letters or texting. Furthermore, formal writings could be complicated for certain types of readers. Children, for example, would be incapable to read formal texts and find them boring. People who have the educational levels of primary school would find it difficult to read, therefore, newspaper should be written a friendly and relaxing way for their readers to enjoy.
In conclusion, people now prefer less formal written language because it is more effective and while it might be advantageous to business people, I argue that in general, its negative effects prevail over its benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 343, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a formal way" with adverb for "formal"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...sound emotionless and boring if written in a formal way, which then lead to failures in demonst...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, then, therefore, while, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in general, such as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1839.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36151603499 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7722651731 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542274052478 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3323403554 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.176470588 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1764705882 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.82352941176 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213111383834 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724180248744 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568194293728 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123430741594 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506414161175 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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