Nowadays, full-time students are dedicating their whole day with their study.Some people believe that they should be involved in other activities too.
To what extant , do you agree or disagree ?
These days, full-time students are devoting their full day with their studies. It is believed by some people, students have to connected with other activities also. Actually, they should have free time to other events and there are many reasons for explain this.
In many universities, we can see that the most students only study without any rest or other activities such as sports, entertainment and parties. And, then , those things will bring restlessness contributed to lassitude and sleepless.Studying without rest, bad effects to students in their life and health. So, universities and colleges should give their students free time for their activities.
Furthermore , in recent years, many diseases strengthening sharply, and against them, they have to hold back with doing exercises and activities such as cycling, working out and others. If students have not time for this, they do not do those things and subsequently, their immune system will be weaker than other people. They should be involved in some activities or they need enough time in order to adequate sleep.
In conclusion, full-time students free time for activities in order to be healthy and productive in their studies.Because, refreshment helps students to be mor productive and they will have the satisfaction of knowing or studying something.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: as well
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, if, so, then, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1115.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 208.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36057692308 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99398111258 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581730769231 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1047901902 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.426920542892 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187429005237 0.084324248473 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775661420071 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279575987509 0.151304729494 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062206823361 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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