People nowadays tend to take their family to another country when they work abroad. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
There is a debate about people's tendency to move to another country along with their family and whether the benefits of that trend outweigh the drawbacks. In my perspective, I personally believe that there are a lot more to consider about its advantages than the drawbacks it has and I will explain my reasons to this conclusion in this essay.
Moving to a different country family tends to have a lot to offer for some people. One of the advantages people can benefit from taking their family with them to another nation is that people can get support from their family and they don't have to rely on themselves to live in a different country. To be more specific, when you move to another country, you will most likely have to live on your own and whenever you are in a tight spot, it will be less difficult to ask for support as your family is there for you. Additionally, the experience of getting to a new nation can be an exciting, fun and educational for both you and your family, especially those who are children. They will get to see a new land, unique cuisine and local people from another country.
Despite the advantages mentioned above, the drawbacks that come with them outnumber the benefits from people taking their family to a new country when they work abroad. One such drawback is the language barrier. When you want to work abroad, it is necessary for you to be adept at the local's language to be able to work effectively. However, it is most likely that your family members might not have learnt the language beforehand and that will make them over reliant on you just to communicate with locals. Therefore, it will make your work go less smoothly. Another problem of the trend is that your family might not be able to adapt to the new environment right away. Since moving to a new place means that you have to accept the local's customs and culture, cuisine and people's personalities, it will be problematic if someone in your family can not adapt to the new country well. For instance, if your parents can not eat spicy food due to their stomach issues, they will not be able to handle Thailand cuisine well as most of its food contain moderate to heavy spices. One last problem that can arise from having your family move along with to a new nation is that they don't know anyone familiar and they have to make new friends again. Normally it will not take much time to do so but if the language barrier is still an issue, your family will have a more difficult time making acquaintances to the local people and become more reliant on you to do so as a result.
In conclusion, although moving to a new country with your family has its merits, the disadvantages of it far outweigh the advantages.
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'locals'' or 'local's'?
Suggestion: locals'; local's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 24.0651302605 266% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2236.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 492.0 315.596192385 156% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54471544715 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70967865282 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45482349087 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.406504065041 0.561755894193 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 718.2 506.74238477 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.7320529713 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.222222222 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300389738613 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107153852205 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900468787633 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193806659009 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263390961998 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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