Many people believe that every individual is responsible for his/her own healthy lifestyle. Others believe that governments should take care of it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People’s opinions differ as to whether establishing one’s healthy lifestyle is the government’s role or the responsibility rests with each individual. While I believe there are some approaches requiring governmental support to be adopted, only people can decide for their own well-being.
Advocates of governmental intervention would point out certain essential actions which cannot be taken without the government. Firstly, it is unquestionable that many of today’s people, especially children, are rather ignorant of the detriment of an unhealthy lifestyle, which is why more people are leading to it. Therefore, the health authorities and educators need to integrate health lessons into the school curricular so as to make the children, and even their parents, more health-conscious and know how to make healthier lifestyle choices. What is more, in this day and age, our sedentary lifestyle is likely to stem from/result from sedentary jobs which seem to be immensely ubiquitous. In order to ease this situation, policies and regulations to encourage employees to do more physical activities during working hours should be imposed by the business owners at the behest of the authorities.
While governmental actions actually provide significant benefits, only individuals can design their own lives. Nowadays, there is a plethora of physical activities and nutritious food options for people to add to their daily life. However, without listening thoroughly to the bodies, people are unlikely to identify which is best suited for them, let alone someone else such as the authorities. In other words, only when people become more self-aware of their own current health status do they take proper actions to consistently combat poor health and live more healthily. Otherwise, no matter what steps governments take, they will always retain their unhealthy habits such as craving for unsafe fast foods high of salt, saturated fat and sugar, or being physically passive.
In conclusion, governments certainly have a role to play in improving the public health, but I believe that only individuals can regulate themselves and find out what is the most beneficial for their future life.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
People’s opinions differ as to whether establishing one’s healthy lifestyle is...
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Line 2, column 423, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...alth lessons into the school curricular so as to make the children, and even their paren...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, as to, in conclusion, such as, in other words, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1859.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02274937102 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62426035503 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.4998224848 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.0 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186418668522 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654366157382 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500727278715 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128704027247 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710887701174 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
People’s opinions differ as to whether establishing one’s healthy lifestyle is...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 423, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...alth lessons into the school curricular so as to make the children, and even their paren...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, as to, in conclusion, such as, in other words, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1859.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02274937102 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62426035503 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.4998224848 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.0 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186418668522 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654366157382 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500727278715 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128704027247 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710887701174 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.