In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study their own country. Nowadays, they have the opportunity to study abroad.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
Although students tend to complete their tertiary education in their home country in the past decade, in this globalized world, they can move to overseas for their education. Moving abroad for university education broaden their chances to get a high-profile job in the future and gain knowledge about cultural diversity, but there are also drawbacks to be taken into account.
Firstly, one of the main benefits is after completion of university degree they can achieve success in their specific field by getting skilled job. For example, if students enrolled in Diploma of nursing which is highly beneficial for getting a Registered Nurse a well qualified job in Australia nowadays. Secondly, as they interact with people having different cultural backgrounds, as a result, got an opportunity to acquire more knowledge about their culture. consequently, leads to make new friends.
On the other hand, one problem with the students who travel abroad for studies is fee structure which they need to pay in different currency. In Canada, students need to pay tuition fees in dollars in order to complete their qualifications that is far more as compared to Indian currency. Therefore, it is hard for students to pay full amount in different currency. Another possible concern is home sickness. In their own country students live with their families so they are able to share their problems and resolve them at home without any stress whereas in foreign countries they need to handle their personal and professional life of their own According to recent survey done by Canadian government concluded that large number of students commit suicide due to depression.
In conclusion, no doubt, students achieving high profile jobs in abroad after completion of study and aware about cultural diversity even though facing problems while paying fees and gets stressed by the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Consequently
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...e their qualifications that is far more as compared to Indian currency. Therefore,...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s and gets stressed by the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, as for, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29333333333 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74575227498 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603333333333 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.4823667343 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.333333333 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.6666666667 7.06120827912 208% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28803917525 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093136588222 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767647012476 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162398192497 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530681702691 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.