3. You recently learned that the local council has decided to demolish a particular building in your area. You disagree with this decision and believe the building benefits the community. Write a letter to the local councilor.
In your letter
• explain what you find valuable about the building.
• Suggest what improvements could be made to the building.
• Describe how retaining the building could benefit the community as a whole.
Dear Mr. Thomas,
I hope this letter finds you with best of health. I am writing this letter to express my deep concern and disagreement with the demolition of our community's oldest building.
The building holds a significant historical value and is a symbol of our cultural heritage. Its beautiful carving and orthodox design depicts the vibrant era of our ancestor. I understand that building is currently in a disastrous condition and is a risk for adject buildings. But demolition is perhaps not a rational decision to make. Rather, there could be multiple ways to renovate the building to make preserve it as a historical treasure.
I suggest to renovate the crucial areas at first to prevent the risk of building to collapse altogether. Furthermore, after renovation the building can be used as a general gathering of our community. Also, from tourism revenue perspective, the building can be a site seeing. Additionally, the building can be commercialized for conducting events and parties.
I request you to reconsider the demolition of the building and brainstorm the alternatives suggested. I look forward to your final decision.
Your Sincerely,
Sam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Thomas, I hope this letter finds you with best o...
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Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'communitys the oldest'.
Suggestion: communitys the oldest
...disagreement with the demolition of our communitys oldest building. The building holds a signif...
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Line 5, column 3, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest renovating'.
Suggestion: suggest renovating
...eserve it as a historical treasure. I suggest to renovate the crucial areas at first to prevent t...
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Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o your final decision. Your Sincerely, Sam
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26737967914 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15196075281 2.54303337028 124% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614973262032 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9973543677 44.8134815571 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.3571428571 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3571428571 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250017114381 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779115404781 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511830754116 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147404922821 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658735632508 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.