Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It becomes an agreement among people which according to some should professionals work where they did their train while some else believe they have this chance to select their countries for job. In my opinion, although professionals have owed to their country, they are free to choose their destinations.
On the one side, governments provide any facilities for students to graduate from university. Nations with this method support students that after their study work for companies, organizations and so on which located in their country. Not only is this make financial support but also it causes they have job security and ensure it. besides, immigrations cost is very high and most of specialists cannot immigrate to other countries for work.
On the other side, immigration and work in other countries make people to be update daily because competition is very high for work. They have lots of challenges during their work but can progress and improve their skills in such situations. In addiction they would learn more languages that help them to communication with others. Hence, some body prefer work for foreign countries. This happen more in third countries because there is any infrastructure for progress.
Finally, despite there is lots of benefit when a professional work abroad it depends on every person to select the location of his/her job. The sensible method it let people choose themselves either stay in their country and pay they owe or they would like immigration. One minus side is all people who have special career have tendency to leave their countries and it is one of the problems that nations face with it
In conclusion, governments would provide every essential tool for their specialists to stay in country. Nations should set some strict roles for every person who want work in other country to prevent this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...re they did their train while some else believe they have this chance to select their c...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...are free to choose their destinations. On the one side, governments provide any...
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Line 2, column 378, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the specialists') or simply say ''most specialists''.
Suggestion: most of the specialists; most specialists
...des, immigrations cost is very high and most of specialists cannot immigrate to other countries for...
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Line 3, column 340, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'somebody'?
Suggestion: somebody
...em to communication with others. Hence, some body prefer work for foreign countries. This...
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Line 4, column 18, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[3]
Message: Did you mean 'there are lots'?
Suggestion: there are lots
...ucture for progress. Finally, despite there is lots of benefit when a professional work abr...
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Line 4, column 418, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f the problems that nations face with it In conclusion, governments would provide...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, hence, so, third, while, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11513157895 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66861885167 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536184210526 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7786275985 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.666666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355621369071 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124198793863 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954527416737 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215086609815 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100771357796 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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