Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It’s thought that parents should take responsibility for educating their children how to become good members; however, others believe that educational institute is the best place to learn behaving well. From my own perspective, I think that parent upbringing should take higher responsibility than school.
Schools can be considered suitable places for children to learn to behave well. With standard education methods, children can adopt good behavior naturally with friends’ and teachers’ support. For instance, many talented students graduated from Le Hong Phong high school or High school for the Gifted, are more likely become good citizens and devote all their passionate life to their hometown when they grow up. However, this only represents a small fraction of the origin of kids’ behavior, while it’s affected by many other factors.
As I mentioned, parent upbringing has more significant influence on their offspring’s behavior. Family is where kids spend most of their early life time, and how kids’ act is a perfectly reflected mirror from their parents’ behavior. Several studies pointed that good citizens are more likely raised in loving families, where they received enough attention and care from their parents. For example, the educated children will show not only good manners when communicate with others, but also fulfill their duties and take responsibility for their tasks. To form children’s behavior, we need to teach them moral lessons, when they are still young. An easiest way for them to learn is by telling stories, adventures like Cinderella, the sleeping beauty, etc.
In conclusion, I think that schools are suitable places for children to adopt exemplary behavior, but family role is far important to shape good behavior for future generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 189, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to behave'.
Suggestion: to behave
...al institute is the best place to learn behaving well. From my own perspective, I think ...
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Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...is where kids spend most of their early life time, and how kids’ act is a perfectly refle...
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Line 5, column 648, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: The
...ral lessons, when they are still young. An easiest way for them to learn is by tel...
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Line 5, column 757, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ke Cinderella, the sleeping beauty, etc. In conclusion, I think that schools are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5035971223 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71347031932 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615107913669 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2720129273 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.692307692 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253266777861 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963462393474 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631256773261 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172689317292 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718840701757 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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