Society should identify those children whose have special talents and provide trainning for them an an early stage to develop their talents.
The given statement claims, "Society should identify those children whose have special talents and provide trainning for them at an early stage to develop their
talents". Our society consist of various kinds of people whose are different age. Children is the one of the high proportionate representation of society in many country.
Each childres have minimum amount of talents in case of few have extraordinary in any sector. I strongly support the given statement about take care of special talents.
Why I choose this statement, I discuss below.
Todays children will lead futrure events. IF anyone have special talens in particular sector, and find friendly environment to develop this talents, this will be a
prospect for the future event. For instances, We can talk about Brazilian football culture. Most of the Brazilian legend football player nurture their skills from childhood. As a result, they
perform more better in any other country in international event.
In another case, Indian government has taken many initiative to identify talents in every sector few years ago. This initiative would choose special talents for different state from their country.
After that, they were nurtured by particular respective authority. As a result, India now dominate in all sector over the world. Their althlets,singer, actor are perform most significant way that benefited indian government to reach their strategic goals.
The invention of various elements did by the special talents whose are dominiting the society by their talents.
In another perspective, someone can say by trainnig anyone can absorved anything. It is slightly right but most of the cases an special talents perform distinactly transperant and effective way.
Above all, Society should choose special talents and take of them for showing their talents that will be added more insights in society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun country seems to be countable; consider using: 'many countries'.
Suggestion: many countries
...portionate representation of society in many country. Each childres have minimum amount of ...
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Line 7, column 53, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...ren will lead futrure events. IF anyone have special talens in particular sector, an...
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Line 7, column 136, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...nd find friendly environment to develop this talents, this will be a prospect for ...
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Line 7, column 164, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to develop this talents, this will be a prospect for the future event. For insta...
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Line 9, column 9, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...m childhood. As a result, they perform more better in any other country in international e...
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Line 12, column 143, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , singer
...ll sector over the world. Their althlets,singer, actor are perform most significant way...
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Line 12, column 162, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'performed'.
Suggestion: performed
...world. Their althlets,singer, actor are perform most significant way that benefited ind...
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Line 15, column 125, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...is slightly right but most of the cases an special talents perform distinactly tra...
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Line 15, column 136, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'talent'?
Suggestion: talent
... right but most of the cases an special talents perform distinactly transperant and eff...
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Line 17, column 105, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m for showing their talents that will be added more insights in society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for instance, in particular, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 293.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50853242321 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78849407257 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57337883959 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1340290886 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.7 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.65 23.4991977007 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.65 5.21951772744 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.97078651685 241% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.474628940037 0.243740707755 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114547387791 0.0831039109588 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.164389864495 0.0758088955206 217% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171881239894 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.200155827309 0.0667264976115 300% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 48.8420337079 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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