People nowadays sleep less than they used to in the past. What do you think is the reason behind this? What are the effects on individuals and people around them?
These days, individuals spend less time sleeping compared to recent ages. This essay will discuss the main causes of this state of affairs and then describe the possible effects of the problem.
To start with, electronic devices that people use before sleep are disturbing the brain. Researchers are convinced that smartphones and other screen-based technologies are adding to stress and anxiety levels, which, in turn, hinder sleep. For example, the last BBC report shows that over the last ten years, the number of adults owning a cellphone has more than doubled, and many of them prefer to use that technology later in the day. Besides, many individuals sleep a lot less because they study or work through the night. This situation happened due to the social and economic changes in our world now, so it’s getting harder to make money for us.
The effects of this issue include physical health problems and a loss of productivity. People who don’t sleep for at least seven or eight hours become tired faster than others at work or school. It’s difficult for them to concentrate on the most important tasks. For instance, research from the ‘Aesthetic Medicine’ magazine reveals that English students who spend less time sleeping demonstrate poor academic performance. Moreover, sleep deprivation can lead to awful tragedies in real life. The thousands of car accidents in every country are usually caused by sleepy drivers.
In conclusion, a lack of sleep is mainly evoked by new forms of high technology and the pressure of modern life. The effects can range from small to huge, so it’s crucial for people to get enough sleep, and it’s important that it be at night.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, moreover, so, then, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0752688172 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55745755579 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637992831541 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0674676436 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223084431841 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683074469454 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424783545386 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132270242715 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022355069442 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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