The graphs below provide information about the sales of three different types of music in England. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
The graphs that we have show us information about the sales of three different genres of music, Pop, classical and rock music, In England in two periods of time,
In the past until 1960 it was the era of classical music it was far more popular and its sales were more than both rock and pop music combined, the total market sales were approximately six billions half for classical and quarter for each pop and rock, while the sales of classical music continued to steadily fall in the following 30 years until it plummeted in the ninetys until it reached 50% of its former glory, on the other hand pop slightly increased in following two decades then had a huge spike in its sales to become the industry’s biggest seller wile rock music hit its peak a little earlier In the eighties at more than double its sells,
At the start of the 21centris the overall market value was 8billions, one eighth for classical half for pop and about 40% for rock in the next year the total market price increased by 2billions, one for each of pop and rock while classical remind still after it the market shares shrinked in size with pop being the highest at 3.5 and classical having a huge spike reaching close to the same amount of sales as rock music then falling the next year followed by regaining of stability by both rock and pop music.
At the start classical music were the top seller but by the end pop music got the lead on it
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, still, then, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 262.0 196.424390244 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45038167939 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23591161275 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484732824427 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 357.3 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 8.94146341463 22% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 131.0 22.4926829268 582% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 618.0 43.030603864 1436% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 583.0 112.824112599 517% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 131.0 22.9334400587 571% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.0 5.23603664747 439% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127545798194 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10382495108 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0177729054425 0.0843802449381 21% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118272847267 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836186646199 0.0819641961636 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 65.0 13.2329268293 491% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -44.57 61.2550243902 -73% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 52.0 10.3012195122 505% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.71 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.67 8.06136585366 157% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 11.4329268293 464% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 54.4 10.9970731707 495% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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