The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales (in various formats) of films from a particular store between 2002 and 2011.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the annual changes that have taken place in the number of rentals and sales (in three different formats) of films from a store from 2002 to 2011. Overall, while the annual number of film rentals and VHS sales went down, the upward trends happened in the sales of Blu-ray and DVD. Although the sales of DVDs witnessed a decrease during the second half of the period, DVDs were still the most popular option.
Regarding the performance of film rentals, in the first two years, the figure exceeded 150,000 units; however, it began to decrease steadily in 2004 and reached about over 50,000 in 2011. Meanwhile, VHS sales, the second-prefered option in 2002 with roughly 80,000 units, faced a dramatic decrease, finally disappearing after 2005.
In terms of DVD sales, in the beginning, the performance was quite low, with about 50,000 units in 2002. However, from 2003 to the end of 2007, the sales number of this option quickly rose and became the top choice of customers. Then, the sales for this type started to fall and stopped at 200,000 units. On the other hand, emerging lately in 2007 with less than 10,000 units, the performance of Blu-ray sales continuously climbed in the next four years; however, the variation was not significant, at over 10,000 units at the end of 2011.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, regarding, second, still, then, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1085.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84375 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42337531705 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4991330197 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.555555556 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8888888889 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.44444444444 5.23603664747 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183512558069 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854517125248 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100993662726 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132510892832 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107642353241 0.0819641961636 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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