These days it is much easier for many people to travel to different countries for tourism than in the past.
Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
With the rise in modernization, life has become very easy in various aspects. People has also developed the sense of exploration due to all the changes that has taken place during this period of time. The most controversial issue today related to is travelling and tourism nowdays; advantageous or not? I will examine this topic from both point of views.
As we know social media has boomed in recent years which has gave access to beautiful tourist spots to people. This has encouraged most of the people to explore new tourist places and make memories, which helps in boosting the economy of the country. Even government of different countries advertise globally to allure tourists to their countries. A recent survey in Europe states that their economy has increased by 25% due to tourism.
Moreover, it also helps people in learning different cultures and exploration of their equisite heritage. It also helps people to bond with people of different countries and ethnicity. Tourism helps small businesses and artisans as well, they sell their handicrafts to tourists which gives them more business . However, the increase tourism also have some drawbacks for the tourist spots. As there has been cases where tourist places were spoiled by distructing the natural beauty of the place and throwing waste. The most evident example is taj mahal and red fort in India.
As we have seen there are number of answers to this question. On balance, however, i tend to believe that since the disadvantages outweighs the advantages therefore, increase in tourism is positive because of its outcomes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13409961686 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6419713889 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597701149425 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7003261767 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.75 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3125 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197785935593 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600683945024 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493765923571 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115058352065 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240988368799 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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