The table below shows information about age, average income per person and population below poverty line in three states in the USA. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table details information about the percentage of two distinctive age brackets, average wages of each individual and population living below the poverty line in three states in the USA.
Overall, Utal is the area where most teenagers choose to live and the older aged over 60 tend to reside in Florida, while the proportion of people in both age groups is not considerable as its counterparts. Additionally, although California accounts for the highest average income per person, most residents here live below the poverty line.
Concerning the proportion of people in two age groups living in three different states, 28% of teenagers under 18 lives in Utal and the gap between proportion of people under 18 residing in California and Florida is not significant with the respective figure being 17% and 16%. By contrast, the percentage of American aged over 60 in Utal is recorded at only 8% compared to 23% of over 60 years-old people in Florida which is double the figure of people under 18 living Florida and California makes up 13% of American in the over 60-year-old bracket.
Regarding the average income per person, California is the state with the highest average wage earned by each individual accounting for 23,000$, followed by Florida with 22,000$ and lastly Utal (17,000$). Although the average income of each person in California and Florida is higher than Utal, its population below poverty line accounts for 16% and 12% correspondingly, whereas only 9% of American in Utal lives in underprivileged status.
- The maps below show a science park in 2008 and the same park today Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- Some people think that countries should produce food their population eats and import less food as much as possible To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste 84
- The world has many towns and cities constructed in previous centuries that were more suitable and livable for people in those times than they are now What problems will this cause What can be done to solve these problems 73
- The given charts give information about the number of students at university in the Uk from 1991 to 2002 government spending and the types of family economic background they cam from in 1991 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 140, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
Suggestion: $000
...ed by each individual accounting for 23,000$, followed by Florida with 22,000$ and l...
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Line 4, column 174, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
Suggestion: $000
...or 23,000$, followed by Florida with 22,000$ and lastly Utal 17,000$. Although the a...
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Line 4, column 198, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
Suggestion: $000
...Florida with 22,000$ and lastly Utal 17,000$. Although the average income of each pe...
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Line 4, column 438, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n Utal lives in underprivileged status.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, regarding, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 965.302439024 133% => OK
No of words: 251.0 196.424390244 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11553784861 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84474984924 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482071713147 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 283.868780488 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.7209816525 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 183.428571429 112.824112599 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.8571428571 22.9334400587 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227710754673 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136835320262 0.103423049105 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11700784018 0.0843802449381 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18496064711 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122880477833 0.0819641961636 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 13.2329268293 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 61.2550243902 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.3012195122 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.