In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
There is a growing trend in some nations that home ownership has been significantly favoured over rental homes. This essay will examine specific explanations for this phenomenon and elaborate on its positive implications on individuals and society.
There are some reasons that explain why numerous individuals across the globe are advancing towards owning a home instead of renting one. In the past, due to a shortage of occupations caused by prolonged wars, most individuals could not secure a permanent job to earn money, hindering them from purchasing a home for settling down. Fortunately, as the world has become more integrated and globalized than ever, substantial occupations in the fields of technology, education, marketing and other sectors have allowed people to work multiple jobs to supplement their income. As a result, higher incomes and the blossom of available apartments are chief contributors to the growing trend of home ownership instead of renting.
From my perspective, the preference for home ownership over its counterpart has positively benefited each individual and society. Firstly, as homeownership rates increase, individuals can completely devote their entire time and energy to the growth of the company where they are employed. The growth of each enterprise drastically elevates the economic growth of each nation, resulting in a better community. Additionally, owning a home can enhance the mental health of homeowners, minimizing the prospect of undergoing mental health issues. Some young citizens these days are reported to experience great pressure from the inability to own a home due to exorbitantly expensive home prices, resulting in irritation, weariness and depression. Therefore, should they own a home, the possibility of facing those mental issues will be under control.
In conclusion, owning a home instead of renting has become an indispensable part of our modern life due to its merits to individuals and society. Without a home, global citizens can suffer from several mental health issues that will affect their work productivity and greatly reduce their quality of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51987767584 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00750494457 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581039755352 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1888470811 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.928571429 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3571428571 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192715368293 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665277533203 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529226362188 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119652332222 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391314473592 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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