It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is obvious that saving money plays a significant role in the future of almost all people from different age brackets. I personally concur that saving money is essential for people in all age brackets, whereas there are some negative sides of saving money.
It is understandable why saving money can be considered to bring some challenges for individuals of all ages. The first reason that makes people concerned about this is the deficiency of precise information about how to save money reasonably which is able to bring about the misunderstanding of saving money. Most people attempt to save money as much as possible by distinctive methods such as avoiding travelling, purchasing refreshments and beverage with low price regardless of its inferior quality and other ways that are not actually practical to apply for long-term. Furthermore, this can also cause a disturbance to others consisting of their acquaintances on account of overemphasizing saving money which will bring about controversial circumstances. However, it is not a prevalent issue in this contemporary society because almost all people now know the definition of saving money explicitly.
Learning how to economize wisely could bring countless advantages for people in different age groups. To begin with, saving money will enable people to purchase everything reasonably and manage their financial status efficiently which helps us to remain a stable life and avoid allocating budget on invaluable stuff or something that wastes a huge amount of money. Additionally, it is also one of the most crucial aspects for individuals to pursue their dream or something that they are fond of such as buying new accommodations, investment on a certain project and travelling to some destinations which helps them to replenish their energy after a long time working constantly. Moreover, the ability to spend money appropriately broadens horizons and creates more opportunities for their career path in the future.
In short, saving money is extremely superior to the development of people, especially youngsters because it is one of the keys that help people to be more successful in the future with a variety of possible chances. Despite its numerous advantages, people must distinguish between stingy and frugal in order not to get into any conflicts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 122, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...all people from different age brackets. I personally concur that saving money is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, whereas, in short, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1958.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33514986376 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07887439076 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555858310627 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.7362490402 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.615384615 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2307692308 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306240074647 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119416629283 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391370139211 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190653739649 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449140728713 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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