Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some Families prefer their children to private schools have not to be forced to pay taxes that helps the state education system. this essay will argue why Families should not pay taxes following by Education system needs support from families who want their children to private schools.
By perception, most people believe that private schools add the conservation to their children future, at the expense of, the students take the best learning to achieve their goals. the reason is that the state economic system is less caring for the students on the other hand the private schools care about the details to upgrade the students. for example, private schools have obtainable technology like smart bored, scan face id for attendances and computers. parents shouldn’t pay any taxes , because they just want their children to get the best learning, so the government have to make all the schools at the same platform.
Secondly, families who prefer their children to private schools , and they shouldn’t pay taxes is completely preposterous. Some people do have much of money to let their children to go to private schools. In the light of 30 percent only for the people are rich that they have enough money to pay for private schools. This problem will solve by let the families who prefer private schools to force them to pay taxes which is support the state education system.
In conclusion, the state education system is for some families prefer their children to private schools to do not let them pay the taxes that helm them. This essay discussed firstly parents argue don't need to pay finance to the state education system followed by parent who choses private schools should support the state of the economic system.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01730103806 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40400542778 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.432525951557 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6035355619 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.833333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.452125461823 0.244688304435 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.213264704243 0.084324248473 253% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123095571205 0.0667982634062 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.351126056043 0.151304729494 232% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112416539197 0.056905535591 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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