Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support state education system To what extent do you agree or disgree with this

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Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support state education system. To what extent do you agree or disgree with this

families who bear all tuition fees for their minors without being granted any benefits from free education should be exempted from tax payment. However, it is not applicable in most countries.
This essay will show to what extent those families are expected to pay taxes.

Most parents prefer to educate their children in private schools in order to provide them with better educational system. Private schools have many benefits like smaller class size, enhanced academic programs in addition to providing a wide range of extracurricular activities. Moreover, private learning frequently allows parental involvement. It costs too much and accordingly, households expect not to carry more costs in form of taxes specially they have never benefit from those payments.
Taking in consideration that taxes percentages are often depending on economic policies and governmental needs, and differ from a state to another. So, it is not fair to obligate this tax burden besides tuition fees.

Despite the increase in tax obligations in many societies, the idea of allowing tax exemption for private learners is considered a path of fantasy. Taxes have been mainly imposed for helping in redistribution of wealth, economy regulations besides supporting societal goals. The primary aim of progressive tax systems is to redistribute income from wealthier individuals to fund different social aspects like education for lower income citizens. Moreover, supporting free education improve individuals’ economic conditions by providing necessary skills and knowledge for professional success that raise them from poverty into higher standards of living, and thus become applicable for tax payments and contribute in governmental revenues’ generation and inflation control.

In conclusion, parents who don’t take advatage from free learning require relief from paying a part of taxes that related to education. While, it is not applicable to ignore their contribution in tax payments even if it’s not worthy for them.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.70627062706 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9401921399 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633663366337 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.9202280624 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.266666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277332386302 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876566912033 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676775887407 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141645482418 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356309602929 0.056905535591 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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